一定要标出伏笔(材料必有伏笔),盯“题示词”
(1)看题目给出的2个段首句,盯“题示词”
(2)确定第一空白段的五个大动作(中文写试卷上)
A。思考这中间要啥 “必要动作”
B。确定该“必要动作”前后需要啥动作
(3)确定第二空白段的五个大动作(中文写试卷上)
A。要啥“必要动作”
B。需要达到什么“结果”
C。能套什么,所感?所悟?难忘?
(4)五个大动作里,每个里有小动作若干
你要清楚要点,谁+干了+什么
一个大动作即为一个大要点
大动作里有小动作若干
比如说,
时间/地点/过渡,祁同伟 with sth. in his hand, doing sth.(表状态),did sth.(表动作)
再比如说,
doing sth. , feeling……,looking…..,
(1)常规大招
1)过渡/时间/地点/逻辑
1/Immediately,……..
2/without hesitation,………..
3/On arrival,…….
4/After a short while,…….
5/Two hours later,…….
6/With all the work done,……
7/At the sight of what had happened,……
8/However,……/Instead,……
9/To 娇娇’s surprise,………
2)细节
1/名词细节两个
with +名词+修饰。和。名词+修饰(修饰指的是形容词副词介词短语非谓语)
with a big smile on 娇娇’s face,…….
a big smile on 娇娇’s face,……..
2/动作细节两个
doing sth. 和 having done sth.
having finished breakfast, sitting on the sofa,娇娇,starting at the screen,is giving a lecture .
3/其他细节
因为…,in that….
以防…..,in case…..
所以….;as a result,…..
为了……,so that…..
如果……,if…
只要…..,as long as….
这件事…..,which…..
感悟
…..,feeling…..
…….,looking……
(2)凑字大招
1/所感
Exhausted/Tired/Cold as I was ,I felt my time and effort worthwhile,for i have made my own contribution to 啥子
2/所悟
From this experience/story,I have learned that 娇娇 might go away, but 娇娇’s love endures
3/难忘(每次必用,相当好用)
what an unforgettable experience it was!