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留学文书大礼包资料包含：

20份留学文书PS范例（非常好上手模仿，涵盖商科人文教育工科计算机等）

12篇留学文书推荐信 （包含学术推荐信和雇主推荐信）

5份留学文书简历模板（附加简历动词表）

-Hook #1 Autobiography 自陈经历法

自陈经历式的开头往往会追朔过去的经历，个人轶事，成长环境等等。为了避免流于"baby language"之俗套，该方法的运用中要强调过去的经历和现在的申请之间的关系。不要只讲故事，不讲为什么讲这个故事。

范例：As a child, I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work. When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waited on customers, and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday, yet I understand that the business world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education, and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master's program of Business Administration at Big Business School.

-Hook #2 Scene 场景描述法

以描述场景作为文章的开端，往往很容易引起读者的兴趣。这些场景应该是对自己影响重大的场景，切忌在写作过程中模糊了焦点，一定要在段尾落脚到这个场景对自己的影响。描述场景的语言要生动，对同学的语言能力要求相对较高。

范例：The doors of the subway closed before our eyes, separating us. It was only my mother and I. My father and my three-year-old sister were now on the train without us. It was our second day in Canada, without a word of English, or even a dollar in her pocket, my mother decided we had no option but to sit and wait where we were, hoping my father would come back for us quickly. I recognize this moment as the epiphany of the struggle of many new immigrants, ……This struggle has been both a source of inspiration and curiosity throughout my life.

-Hook #3 Quotation 引用开篇法

这里的引用可以是名人名言，也可以是新闻片段，论文片段，电影台词……总之任何出自他人之口/手的inspiring的文字都可以作为PS的开头。不要为了引用而引用，“这是最好的时代，也是最坏的时代”，狄更斯如是说。然后呢？后半段才是重点。用引用作为开头的前提一定是有感而发，不要无病呻吟。

范例：“Nature has established patterns originating in the return of events, but only for the most part.” It is the latter part of Gottfried von Leibniz’s letter to Jacob Bernoulli in 1703 that lays the theoretical foundations of the existence of risk. Without risk, we would live in a dull world where all future events……It is the ability to quantify risk that enables secure financial growth. For this, we rely on the work of Actuaries……

-Hook #4 Question 设问开篇法

开头抛出一个小问题，很能引起读者的注意和兴趣。但是一定要对这个问题有所展开，回答或者描述。如果这个问题是和你的个人特质，学生兴趣的紧密相关的就更好了。问题不要太大，不然不好收场。

范例：Why me? I was so surprised when they announced my name as the winner of the $25,000 top-graduating award given at the University of Toronto Faculty of Music. This award was intended to be given to one graduating student in all levels of studies at the faculty who is deemed to make the biggest contribution to the field of music. My face blushes at the thought of that, but a brisk conversation on convocation day with a juror revealed to me that they emphasized public service through leadership in music. My experiences reflected well in that light. As the concertmaster of all eight orchestras……

-Hook #5 Analysis 分析开篇法

通过分析时事、社会现象、行业动态等，既可以展现自己的知识面，又可以很自然而然得引出自己的研究和学习兴趣，可谓是一举两得。使用该方法重要的是要选好分析的对象，不要太笼统。切忌一上来就分析“本质”或者“根本原因”等。因为这样做一来很不严谨，再来一篇1000字以内的小文章凭什么谈本质。

范例：Artificial intelligence has generated lots of unrealistic expectations. Many businesses deliberately label products with reference to such technology yet with little concern to user expectation. I think the marriage of technology and design won't be a successful one without special attention to human-centered design thinking …… I am fully aware that a further study of the application of technology in product design could facilitate my goal, which is why I am applying for the Design and Technology program at Parsons.

-Hook #6 Direct Opening 开门见山法

在你想不到你有什么素材可以用前面的五种方法的时候，请果断采用第六种方法！不要再绞劲脑汁求新求变了。能做到直截了当，言简意赅，节省大家的时间，也是一种美德哦。

范例：Having majored in literary studies (world literature) as an undergraduate, I would now like to concentrate on English and American literature. I am especially interested in nineteenth-century literature, women's literature, Anglo-Saxon poetry, folklore and folk literature.

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